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Author Topic: Chapter 1, Page 14  (Read 9603 times)
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« on: Jan 02 '07, 04:24:00 »

Page 14 is up!

FYI, Ketai has been minorly redesigned. To those who enjoyed her large mammaries, we apologize, but we concluded that her hourglass figure didn't make much sense with her original concept as a lean, fast runner.
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« Reply #1 on: Jan 02 '07, 04:29:19 »

The cool thing is that we now know for certain that if we produced Jungle Fire full-time, we'd be able to get two pages out every week. It could be done.
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« Reply #2 on: Jan 02 '07, 04:38:50 »

I resent the implication that Vii can be siic'd (spelling?) on someone!  Tongue

(PS: /wave, /hello, /Happy New Years!!  Pirate Pirate)
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« Reply #3 on: Jan 02 '07, 04:44:19 »

Hi there Brierlea, and happy new year to you too Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: Jan 02 '07, 05:32:23 »

I'm not really getting whats going on with Vii and Ketai
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« Reply #5 on: Jan 02 '07, 06:23:42 »

The lizard girl is making a pest of herself. My impression is that Ketai is arranging the items in her tent in a way that Vii disagrees with.
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« Reply #6 on: Jan 02 '07, 07:36:20 »

(just wanna make sure everyone knows my statement was made with a lighthearted sentiment! Wink  I realize Vii is making a brat of herself!)
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« Reply #7 on: Jan 02 '07, 16:02:18 »

I'm guessing that Vii doesn't like change much. She probably keeps to a pretty rigid routine underneath everything, as well.

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« Reply #8 on: Jan 02 '07, 17:29:35 »

Seems Ketai likes her stuff in one sort of order and Vii in another.
Or perhaps it's simply Vii trying to get her way with something, she lost her shell-drawing after all.
Or she just want some attention from the grownups.

Lots of possibilities.

Ketai is very patient though, so I can see how Vii might have become attached to her.
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« Reply #9 on: Jan 02 '07, 17:55:55 »

Or she could be the reptilian incarnation of River and be really randomly crazy Cheesy

I love this page and the last. The dual storytelling of dialog + action as two separate things is really difficult to pull off, but it's done well in this case. I can follow both, and it totally makes sense from a human (relatively, considering none are 'human' here) perspective. The still pictures give way to what you can picture in your head as fluid motion of what's going on.

..For me anyways Grin
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« Reply #10 on: Jan 03 '07, 06:16:58 »

The still pictures give way to what you can picture in your head as fluid motion of what's going on.

..For me anyways Grin

I'm really glad that it comes across as a fluid motion, because the layout of this page was a toughie. The space is very constricted, but we felt that in order for Vii-Ketai reactions and interactions to make any sense there had to be a fair amount of it shown.
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« Reply #11 on: Jan 06 '07, 14:37:50 »

I like how Foxeye and her part of the conversation is kept mostly in the background. I think that helps a lot. Its like when we were kids and mom and dad would be having one conversation and the kids would be doing something totally un-related. In my kid-mind, we were in the foreground and the parents in the background. So, for me to have this page set up this way makes it easy to follow both and believable too.

Did any of that make sense?
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