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Martilena
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« on: Jul 05 '06, 12:50:43 »

Woot! Love the look on Fox's face when Ketai says Vii reminds her of Fox when she first came. And what mischief are those boys getting into?

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Martilena
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The Autumn Ranger

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« Reply #1 on: Jul 05 '06, 23:36:19 »

Oooh, this page looks a little brighter and smoother than the others.  Smiley

I also like the dialogue and the fact that you didn't feel you had to put words in Fox's mouth when she looked at Ketai funny.
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Feydir
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Back in formation

« Reply #2 on: Jul 06 '06, 01:08:21 »

I love the bottom panel. Beautiful
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« Reply #3 on: Jul 06 '06, 01:11:55 »

Gorgeous work!
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Rootbeer & Moogles. Wait, what?

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« Reply #4 on: Jul 06 '06, 03:49:12 »

The intercut of dialogue and atmosphere depicted visually works perfectly to give the atmosphere of the location. It really immerses you, even after coming back to a single page after several weeks since the prior one Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: Jul 10 '06, 04:12:29 »

This page is nothing short of simply stunning. I really love looking at every single one you put out.
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