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« on: Feb 27 '06, 00:22:53 »

And now, the thrilling, thrilling *cough* continuation:

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« Reply #1 on: Feb 27 '06, 01:57:38 »

OK so, like, does this mean we can't bug yuh for the NEXT page? Wink

J/k, j/k!!! I loves it, I do!!! Smiley  Pirate
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« Reply #2 on: Feb 27 '06, 02:38:53 »

awesome
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« Reply #3 on: Feb 27 '06, 02:49:13 »

He has more between his ears then fur. There's clearly a question mark there.

Kids will be kids. Even when one's a horrible lizard mutant and the other's an obnoxious cat monster Roll Eyes

Great work guys. Interested to see where you're going with this
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« Reply #4 on: Feb 27 '06, 05:50:54 »

I was waiting for the bubble in the last panel....

Poor Iri. 

They both have so much to learn, about each other, and about themselves.

(sits down to wait - almost patiently - for the lessons.)

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« Reply #5 on: Feb 27 '06, 11:11:46 »

The drawing of Irianta was really, really good. Smiley
What I mean is that Foxeye didn't make human expressions in a cat face, but made cat expressions in a cat face.

Vii also came across really nicely, though it's obviously harder with Vii wince facial expressions are harder to make.



One thing bugs me though .. last frame, the fere right next to Fox ... what's up with it's right arm ?
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« Reply #6 on: Feb 27 '06, 15:06:56 »

I looooooove it! Omg the expressions on Iri are wonderful! And you can really see the anger and frustration in Vii just from the way she throws one shell and kicks another and the whole stalking off in a huff is perfect.

The last panel: Anker, I think Mom has her hand - er, pardon me - paw in an odd position trying to keep the sun out of her eyes as she looks toward where the yell came from.
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« Reply #7 on: Feb 27 '06, 16:27:37 »

*wags tail happily*

Yar, reptiles don't have a lot of facial expression. And given the style of the comic, as Anker says, we don't really want to just slap on human expressions.    Thank goodness for body language!  Still...Vii would be very good at playing poker. Laughing

He has more between his ears then fur. There's clearly a question mark there.

Heeee!   :D 

The last panel: Anker, I think Mom has her hand - er, pardon me - paw in an odd position trying to keep the sun out of her eyes as she looks toward where the yell came from.

Yeppers, just so.
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« Reply #8 on: Feb 27 '06, 22:01:07 »

The ironic thing about the whole scene is that Iri probably doesn't have the slightest clue on what he did wrong. He just knows that Vii is terribly upset right now about something he did, but that's about it. He's an airhead...
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« Reply #9 on: Feb 28 '06, 00:43:13 »

He's an airhead...
Understandable.  He's male  Pirate

 Ninja

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« Reply #10 on: Feb 28 '06, 02:45:15 »

the artist and the jock!

I love the facial expressions. Who is yelling mom?

They seem pretty mature for being seven and five..but I gues they would.
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« Reply #11 on: Feb 28 '06, 14:44:21 »

ROFL!  This page made Cartman's voice in my head.

"MMMMMMMMyyyyyyyyyAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, Iri's being a dildo!"

"Well I know a certain kitty kitty who's sleeping with mommy tonight."

Wonderful page. ^^  I love how Iri is totally unphased when she throws the shell at his head.
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« Reply #12 on: Feb 28 '06, 14:52:29 »

Damn it, I need to go to bed and I can't stop examining this page.  Tongue  I blame you Fox.
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« Reply #13 on: Feb 28 '06, 15:44:05 »

Ahhh!! This is what I get when I don't check my email over the weekend!

But made one of my worst days of the week brighter!  Grin

I LOVE the expressions on Iri's face. Foxeye, this page has got to be my favorite page so far.

Hamster spin! 
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« Reply #14 on: Feb 28 '06, 20:27:17 »

But made one of my worst days of the week brighter!

Y'know, that's one of the biggest compliments, Zeltaria Smiley

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And Corey:
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« Reply #15 on: Feb 28 '06, 20:42:36 »

There are so many amazing compliments and comments in this thread, I don't know where to start.   Love you all

"MMMMMMMMyyyyyyyyyAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, Iri's being a dildo!"

Haha! at Iri

Damn it, I need to go to bed and I can't stop examining this page.  :P  I blame you Fox.

I blame Iri.  Tongue He's the master of cat faces and without his back-seat-drawing it would have been a lot weaker.   He also has the remarkable ability to get all kinds of faces out of our cats when he needs to demonstrate something.   :eek 

Actually, I'm pretty psyched about this page because even though it's always been a collaboration on the layout/script/story, his extra involvement in the art stage made something click.  Now if I could just get the guy to attend art classes so he can sketch his ideas/corrections out better, we'd be rockin'. 
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« Reply #16 on: Feb 28 '06, 22:52:50 »

Well, just tell him, no schooling, no marital bonuses!! Wink
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« Reply #17 on: Jun 29 '06, 06:41:59 »

I was cleaning out some of my old files, and I came across this first revision of the page that shows the initial way the dialog went Grin

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« Reply #18 on: Jun 29 '06, 06:45:01 »

BWAH-hahahahahahahah~!

"I sulk now, m'kay?"


(gasps for air, then goes off again, pounding the desk...)

-Breccia
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« Reply #19 on: Jun 29 '06, 14:37:55 »

*grabs a towel to wipe the monitor off*


remind me not to take a sip of tea as I read this.
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« Reply #20 on: Jul 01 '06, 15:47:08 »

Laughing
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