|
Jerelyn
|
 |
« on: Jun 14 '06, 04:16:12 » |
|
Index of versions: 13 June 20065 July 20061 August 200611 August 20062 January 20076 January 20074 March 200721 April 200718 June 2007 | Alt VersionFinished~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I was planning, maaany moons ago, to do a fan drawing of M'jou for Corey, but I never found time for it. And then Serenity appeared in the storyline, and I just fell in love with her. So I figured I'd put 'em together. Then I was like "wtheck, Candy is fun too, we'll put her in and make it a sort of 'women in reflex's life" sort of thing". So, yeah. And I haven't done a wip and asked for feedback/crits in...ages. So I figured...since this one is gonna take me a while what with the comic and a desire to have this one be more than just a speed drawing, I'd just start what will likely be my longest wip ever.  Which is to say, no, this isn't going to be done in time for the Reflex fanart contest, but that's ok, since I started it because I like the comic and characters, not because I wanna be in a contest.  So, um, yeah, M'jou looks like a mutant frog in this. Forgive her for it isn't her fault. I'm just playing around with colors right now, and balance. Not easy for folks to crit, but... ...stuff to crit: - color balance (yeah, I know, not supposed to work on white  ) - composition - character problems (that's for Breccia and Corey to say...like height, outfits, temperment...fwiw m'jou is not supposed to look so devious...and I know Candy's chain doesn't show cleavage, but with her in that position it just BEGS for cleavage)  |
|
|
|
« Last Edit: Jul 24 '07, 03:41:09 by Jerelyn »
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
BrecciaSilentstep
|
|
« Reply #1 on: Jun 14 '06, 06:37:17 » |
|
(blinks) (stares) (closes mouth)
Wow.
Um. I'm not an artist, so commentary on composition and such is hard for me... but...
It seems to balance well, with the way it's set up. Colourwise, M'jou is supposed to be a pale sky blue (powder blue?) which might not balance well with Serenity's robes. She does have orange and white markings, though, like Reflex's circles. That's where he gets them from. Her red to balance Candie's red will work well, I think.
Height wise... (frowns) Female frogloks are bigger than male, and Serenity is supposed to be small for her age. So M'jou would be larger. I'm not sure how that would work with the composition, though.
I'd need Corey's input on that too. But that's what pops to mind.
But otherwise.. (goes back to gawking) I LOVE Serenity! Her face is wonderful! And yes, show cleavage. Candie begs cleavage.
This is so cool!
-Breccia
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Jerelyn
|
|
« Reply #2 on: Jun 14 '06, 15:25:55 » |
|
It seems to balance well, with the way it's set up. Colourwise, M'jou is supposed to be a pale sky blue (powder blue?) which might not balance well with Serenity's robes. I will make it balance! *glares at the frog skin and robe and dare them to say otherwise* Height wise... (frowns) Female frogloks are bigger than male, and Serenity is supposed to be small for her age. So M'jou would be larger. Ohhh, that I didn't know! I wrote down that Serenity is 4'7", guessed that candie is 5'10" based on how she compares to the height of the men, and saw reflex was 3'5" when slouching. I just sort put M'jou as the same as reflex. Fortunately there's room in the composition to make her taller, since there's that gap between her and Candy. In fact, that might be an improvement. I'd need Corey's input on that too. Aye, I'm hoping he'll show his head eventually.  This is so cool! ^_^ Only took me like...a year?..to get around to starting it. Almost to the day. I still have the photographs you sent me of the frog that M'jou is based on. |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Starrydance
|
|
« Reply #3 on: Jun 14 '06, 16:26:29 » |
|
Lets see, I just woke up here and I dont know the characters, but! =p Everything looks pretty good to me first off, however- I do really love the circle based comp. youve got going on, but it rather "stops" at the blue robed girl. If you could have a few more "strands" of the blondes hair pointing down towards the blue robed girl, and then some of her ribbons following "the flow" and (if its within the character) maybe even her robe arm "ends" falling towards the Froglok, it would help solidify the circle. Then the spell effects would lead to the hair would lead to the ribbons, would lead ot the robe, would lead to the spell effects. Tada! Lookin good, glad you shared WIP!  |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Jerelyn
|
|
« Reply #4 on: Jun 14 '06, 16:37:44 » |
|
You don't know the characters?  That can't be right...you've never read Question Norrath? You know you want to clickI see what you mean about the circle stopping at her. I think the circle was accidental *cough*, but now that you pointed it out...hmmm...do I *want* a balanced circle, or I do want her to seem like a point of still calm :zen in the midst of the flow and movement of the other two. Hmm...  Sorry, just thinking out loud. Thanks Starry. ^_^ |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
BrecciaSilentstep
|
|
« Reply #5 on: Jun 14 '06, 17:00:22 » |
|
Ohhh, that I didn't know! I wrote down that Serenity is 4'7", guessed that candie is 5'10" based on how she compares to the height of the men, and saw reflex was 3'5" when slouching. I just sort put M'jou as the same as reflex. Yes. But what you don't know (we haven't come out and stated it, but both Corey and I have discussed it) is that Reflex himself is a 'runt.' He was ...err... essentially, a 'preemie', and is thus a little smaller than most froglok males. This only adds to his natural agility, and he's grown since, and certainly has built up his strength.... but when we see another froglok with him in comparison, you'll see the size difference. It's a long way in the future, but you'll get to see that comparison eventually. (impish smile) -Breccia |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Starrydance
|
|
« Reply #6 on: Jun 14 '06, 20:27:24 » |
|
Ive read bits and peices, but I think I always accidently choose the bits and peices that require acutal memory of the EQ! And I dont remember much of it, so Im like .. hmm.. I dont get it.
:tearyeyes!
I have flipped through and just looked at the pictures on several occasions. =p
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
Feydir
I'd rather be Picard
Veteran
Posts: 558
Back in formation
|
|
« Reply #7 on: Jun 15 '06, 01:12:59 » |
|
I've read questing Norrath. Who's the female frog. Not familyar with that one.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Obi-Rak Kaeliri
|
|
« Reply #9 on: Jun 17 '06, 02:51:57 » |
|
And, since it's his birthday, happy birthday, Corey!(not that he's hanging around here lately  ) |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Jerelyn
|
|
« Reply #10 on: Jun 17 '06, 07:26:53 » |
|
A small update with work done on Serenity's face.  |
|
|
|
« Last Edit: Feb 11 '07, 07:09:52 by Jerelyn »
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
Feydir
I'd rather be Picard
Veteran
Posts: 558
Back in formation
|
|
« Reply #11 on: Jun 17 '06, 15:38:30 » |
|
That's great, beautiful detail on the closeup of her(Serenity's) face.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
Martilena
Blueshirt
Veteran
Posts: 565
|
|
« Reply #12 on: Jun 18 '06, 04:27:00 » |
|
nicely done!
Do we need to boot the birthday boy to make him come look at this?
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
Martilena
71 druid of Tunare (semi-retired)
Maisie
80 warden/ 80 provisioner Nektulous server
|
|
|
|
Jerelyn
|
|
« Reply #13 on: Jun 18 '06, 05:32:58 » |
|
We might need to, though I suppose it's not so bad if he's surprised when the picture's done. |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Jerelyn
|
|
« Reply #14 on: Jul 06 '06, 04:15:35 » |
|
Been finding a few spare moments here and there for this. More detail work on Serenity and I picked colors for the bg. I hadn't envisioned pastels at the beginning...it didn't seem fitting...but nothing else I tried clicked as well for me. Well, I suppose they are females after all, and Candy is rather girly for a bringer of death and corruption.  |
|
|
|
« Last Edit: Feb 11 '07, 07:10:18 by Jerelyn »
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
Corey
I <3 Quizes!
Adept
Posts: 102
The Autumn Ranger
|
|
« Reply #15 on: Jul 07 '06, 07:43:21 » |
|
Omg, get me a fan to pop bre over the head with for not telling me about this being here. 1, thanks for the birthday wishes, they still mean something even though I just saw them today. >.< 2, I like it so far, I've already told you over IM things I think, but I really love how serenity is coming out. That's a great mouth you have going on there. Cute. ^^ I can't wait to see more.  |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Jerelyn
|
|
« Reply #16 on: Aug 01 '06, 06:19:29 » |
|
Some more pecking away at this one. I warmed up Serenity's skin tone a little and just tried to combat the shmoo-effect. Balls are a little oddly positioned and her eyes are a tad unfocused (but maybe that's a good thing? Must ponder that), but it's creeping closer.  |
|
|
|
« Last Edit: Feb 11 '07, 07:07:49 by Jerelyn »
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
Cobalt Katze
*flee*
Veteran
Posts: 519
Rootbeer & Moogles. Wait, what?
|
|
« Reply #17 on: Aug 01 '06, 07:34:37 » |
|
Wow, it's really coming together Keep it up~ |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Jerelyn
|
|
« Reply #18 on: Aug 02 '06, 06:09:12 » |
|
Wow I'm having fun. This is what comes when I stop being such a worrywart about stuff and just work on things when I feel like it. *squee* More detail/etc on Serenity and the beginnings of a face for evil-crazy lady. She doesn't look crazy or evil enough yet, but it's a start.  |
|
|
|
« Last Edit: Feb 11 '07, 07:07:58 by Jerelyn »
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
Cobalt Katze
*flee*
Veteran
Posts: 519
Rootbeer & Moogles. Wait, what?
|
|
« Reply #19 on: Aug 02 '06, 06:16:02 » |
|
Kinda Glory-esque at the moment |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Jerelyn
|
|
« Reply #20 on: Aug 02 '06, 15:14:20 » |
|
Y'know...I hadn't thought of that before, but Candy's antics do remind me of Glory quite a bit.
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Starrydance
|
|
« Reply #21 on: Aug 02 '06, 15:31:07 » |
|
Looking lovely <3
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Jerelyn
|
|
« Reply #22 on: Aug 12 '06, 07:06:21 » |
|
A bit o' work on the chainmail and chest region. I'm somewhat happy with the effect of the chainmail, but I have this feeling that I can do better.  |
|
|
|
« Last Edit: Feb 11 '07, 07:08:08 by Jerelyn »
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Siwan
|
|
« Reply #23 on: Aug 12 '06, 10:13:16 » |
|
 wow really pretty!!
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
You shape living,I shape Lives
|
|
|
Acorncupcake
Fledgling
Posts: 11
|
|
« Reply #24 on: Aug 12 '06, 17:15:17 » |
|
Oh my Foxeye I went bacl to page one and read through and my goodness this is soo pretty.. great work so far hun. *Hugs*
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
